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Question

Monsters (28)
B Luster Soldier
Blue Eyes W Dragon
Neo Deadalus
Wingweaver
Barrel Dragon
E Hero Bladedge
Deadalus
Dark Magician
Luster Dragon
Mad Dog of Darkness
Vorse Raider
Spear Dragon
Homunculus
Dark Blade
Ninja Grandmaster Sasuke
La Jinn
Great Angus
Harpie's Brother
Warrior Dai Grepher
Sonic Duck
Magician's Valkyria
E Hero Sparkman
Trojan Horse
Sonic Bird
Battle Footballer
Mystical Elf
Winged Kuriboh
Kuriboh
Magics (16)
Monster Reincarnation
Fissure
Swords of Revealing Light
Warrior Returning Alive
Soul Exchange
Heavy Storm
Scapegoat
Mystical Space Typhoon
Lightning Blade
Horn of the Unicorn
Malevolent Nuzzler
Premature Burial
Raregold Armor
Gaia Power
Legendary Ocean
B Luster Ritual
Traps (12)
Dark Spirit of the Silent
Cemetary Bomb
Jar of Greed
Sakuretsu Armor
Dust Tornado
Compulsory Evacuation Device
Nutrient Z
Gift of the Mystical Elf
Draining Shield
Call of the Haunted
Solemn Wishes
Magic Jammer

Answer 1

ok personally i suggest making a deck theme like cyber dragon deck or monarch, e-hero or somethin but if u wanna make just a beatdown deck u need to change alot of cards. first dont rly use lvl 4 1800 normal monsters becuz there r alot of 1900 lvl 4 monsters (gemini elf, insect knight, archfiend soldier, skilled dark magician, mad dog of darkness) also u have to many tribute cards like blue eyes and wing weaver, and take out that black luster ritual and the monster its too hard to get him out and hes not rly worth it hes just a 3000 atk and no effect what so ever so i highly suggest to let him go, also put some monarchs in there like zaborg or mobius to replace the blue eyes that is out also put in some more cards that destroy ur opponent's cards like a lightning vortex etc. (make sure they rnt banned like dark hole) take out all equip spell cards except if they go with a particular monster, or they r rly good like snatch steal (WOOT ITS UNBANNED), mage power, united we stand. o yea also take out the daedalus and legendary ocean combo, i kno its rly good combo but its alot better if its in a water deck, take out jar of greed becuz ur just stalling ur draw because if it wasnt there u would have drawn the card that was below jar of greed (except if u have a big eye combo or a cat of ill omen combo)take out cemetary bomb, its not rly that great, another sakuretsu, try hard to get a mirror force, and take out gift of the mystical elf (o yea take mystical elf out too) o yea a good monster that destroys ur opponent's monsters is exiled force, try to get one of those he's in LOD (legacy of darkness as a super rare) but since its hard to find a LOD pack try DB2 (dark beginnings 2) hes a common in there. hopefully after all these changes ur deck will be improve, good luck

Answer 2

this deck has huge problems. its not very healthy for a deck to have all those high level monsters. also, if you are going to use low level, high ATK monsters, you should try using a deck based on the card spiritual earth art kurogane (aka kurogane toolbox). another thing, if you want to be able to draw the right cards quicker, you should have at most a 50 card deck (the "every card in my deck is the right card"idea does not work, if thats what you are thinking). you want cards that kill right away, and make use of themselves the second they hit the field, like smashing ground (although fissure is a good substitute).

Answer 3

First, you have too many cards. Second, you have too many tribute monsters. Third, your deck is about as random as it gets.

You need to start over. Buy a Structure deck. Don't add cards just because their ATK is high or because you really like them. Add cards because they are on theme and will help your deck. Spellcaster's Judgement, Warrior's Triumph, and Machine Re-Volt are the top 3 Structure decks out there. All can be modified into playable decks that win.

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Answer 4

i think u need to up on your trap cards. i think you need these:
Waboku
Compulsory Evacuation Device
Staunch Defender
A Hero Emerges
and DNA Transplant
Also, so good magic cards are
Secret Pass To The Treasures
Last Will
Yami
and Autonomous Action Unit
IDK about the monsters but i do have some nice 1. all of the magic and trap cards i named i have but u probably don't live by me so hey...

Answer 5

that deck has to many cards
if ur trying to do a normal deck which looks like your doing, just start over and do this
monsters(21)
18 normal monsters (of ur choice)
1 sangan
3 cyber dragon
spells(9)
3 enemy contoller
1 scapegoat
1 prematural burial
1 snatch steal
3 brain controls

traps(12):
3 justi break
3 backup soilders
2 sakuratsu
1 magic cylinder
1 mirror force
2 widespread ruins

Answer 6

I have no idea wat kind this deck is, but i have 2 say is random. I think u got 2 many monster thats need 2 tribute. keep dis in mind da more tribute monster u have the less monster 2 summon.

Answer 7

i also think that you should focus on creating a themed deck...
i don't think your cards are in sync with each other... and yes like others here have said it, you have way too many tribute cards which will really give you problems later...

Answer 8

It's okay as a mix deck. It all depends on how the strategy unfolds.

Answer 9

my lord u have a lot of cards my lil bro says they r good

Answer 10

jesus christ you have a lot of cards. sell them!!!!!