Tell me if you think this is a good poem, it's for class?

Question

I was walking down the street, and saw my sister, I punched her in the face and got a blister-

That's all I have so far. I do not like my sister.

Answer 1

sorry buddy but that sucks..keep trying though! :)

Answer 2

I kicked her in the face
and I sprayed her eyes with mace

I told her shes a whore
and a stinking miserable bore

Her *** is big and fat
and she smells just like a rat

I wish that she would die
then I'd be a happy guy

She should have been drowned at birth
so we'd be better off on earth

So take my sister please
and bring her to her knees

I won't be at her wake
and I'll be eating cake

Mom why did you give birth to this *****
Thank God she's now in a ditch

Answer 3

Dark Dr. Suess. ("I do not like green eggs and ham.") How 'bout this:

Saw my sister
got a blister
all I've got so far

Writing sucks
it's just the yucks
I want to be a star

Not the kind
that works and grinds
that busy's not for me

Too much work
is just for jerks
I'm lazy, don't you see?

{*-*}

Answer 4

Awesome, I hate my sister too! She may be the devil's twin but the devil is scared of her. anyway I got something you could add

It may have hurt after that hit,
but she got a bloody nose...so worth it,

OH! But here's a poem I made you can use...

Roses Are Red
Violets Are Blue
I Hate Our Mother, because She Gave Birth to You!

Of coarse that would be something you would have to entitle 'a poem for my sister'.

Answer 5

This is an excellent poem if you want the school counselor dragging you into her office, calling your mom and child services.

Answer 6

Uhh... violent..


Try "implying" violence without actually stating it so bluntly.

Answer 7

i don't think your teacher will appeciate that too much.

Answer 8

your retarted!