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here is the thing: i am in a new band, but none of of can write, and they chose ME to do it!!!!! well i cant write them either, so could i please have any suggestions or even a chorus or something like that? also please put a song name. that will help too. thanks
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2007-03-06 08:35:59 · 14 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music Music

14 answers

Write about your feelings!! =]

2007-03-06 08:43:30 · answer #1 · answered by Bandgeeksrule 2 · 0 1

You can try this, I doubt it's very good but I wrote it one day when a couple of my friends were playing guitar. I named it shallow eyes

Verse 1

Every word you say burns through my ears and flashes through my mind.
My blood runs hateful through my veins.
You make me wish I was dead while in my head the screaming never ends.
I will be your everything but you will mean nothing to me.
CHORUS:
Because I deserve better
I reserve the right to ignore everything you've said
I won't convert to your plastic ways and your shallow eyes.

Verse 2
You make my skin crawl with every touch.
You're the reason my eyes burn at night
You think you've won me over but you're right where you belong
high on your tower away from me and what we'll never be
Just leave me alone!

Because I deserve better
I reserve the right to ignore everything you've said, I won't convert to your plastic F***ed up ways and your shallow, your shallow eyes.


Be aware however that I am loaning it to you, it is copyrighted so feel free to use it, you just can't put it on a CD that you are going to sell or anything.


Hope that helps or at least gives you an idea of your own.

2007-03-06 16:54:00 · answer #2 · answered by cheesussinclair 2 · 0 0

When you write a song, you need a "hook" -- the repetitive chorus-like part of the song that will stick in your head. Maybe you can start with a catchy hook and build a song around that. (Create the hook, then bridge, then fill in the lyrics with the music). Just look around you and pick an object. Then think of a catchy hook involving that object. Try it. Blue t-shirt. Now, you create the hook!

2007-03-06 16:40:31 · answer #3 · answered by Shibi 6 · 0 0

Think of a song about a general topic that happens to everyone. Like u met a girl and she has a guy but she wants u, I dont know just a thought.

2007-03-06 16:40:09 · answer #4 · answered by Kawainani 4 · 0 0

What do you play and what type of music?

Just think of a song in your head and then try to create it.

2007-03-06 16:41:12 · answer #5 · answered by Captor of Sin 6 · 0 0

be imaginative! ask them what they like,
or ask them to give you ideas. i mean,
if your in a a band ,they gotta help you.
or you could just take lines from your fav songs and put it together.

2007-03-06 16:41:54 · answer #6 · answered by Fallen Angel 2 · 0 0

Be opened mined and maybe teach other how to write. Sing what y'all like. Girls, cars, how life should be?, things y'all like.

2007-03-06 16:42:02 · answer #7 · answered by Robby M 3 · 0 0

Eat My Dust

Eat my Dust mother f**ker
Eat it for dinner

2007-03-06 16:43:42 · answer #8 · answered by ontheicebwilson@sbcglobal.net 2 · 0 0

I called it: Represent

Represent this sh1t right here
woot woot!
Represent this sh1t right here
woot woot!

I'm a crazy son of a *****
I can murder anyone with his a ss on my fist
I've been tripping on acid n sh1t
sh1t I take out of my diaper n sniff

I hang out with men gayer than me
with big boobs and reverse g-strings
with bras made of expired whip cream
I lick them on their nipples and scream
Oh god how tasty is this!!

I've been through hell, and hell been through me
I've been to public bathrooms too and caught a disease
The one that does not let u pe e with ur d1ck
the one that makes your anus bleed
stuff yellow and green

Represent this sh1t right here
woot woot!
Represent this sh1t right here
woot woot!

Take that right there *****

2007-03-06 16:42:16 · answer #9 · answered by Diz n Dat 3 · 0 2

Why can't you see what I see,
You are always closing your eyes to me,
Why cant you let things be,

Title: Blinded

2007-03-06 16:43:06 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 0 0

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