"Truly great friends are hard to find, difficult to leave, and impossible to forget." Luckily, I had the chance to find a great friend, one who I will always have in my heart. Needless to say, she was someone who had a great impact upon my life, someone worth always remembering. This special friend who I know I will never forget was Mary Ellen Gagliardo Scott, my fifth grade teacher. Not only was she a teacher to her student, but a friend and a role model for most of them, as well.
or
"Truly great friends are hard to find, difficult to leave, and impossible to forget." Luckily, I had the chance to find a great friend, one who I will never forget and one who I will always have in my heart. Needless to say, she was someone who had a great impact upon my life and someone worth always remembering. Her name was Mary Ellen Gagliardo Scott, my fifth grade teacher. Not only was she a teacher to her student, but a friend and a role model for most of them, as well.
i know they sound alike ...
2007-03-06 08:08:58 · 5 answers · asked by Jessie 4 in Education & Reference ➔ Homework Help
The first
Also student > students
2007-03-06 08:14:56 · answer #1 · answered by ¥¥Z 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
The first one
2007-03-06 16:15:34 · answer #2 · answered by givemelust_flash 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
The second one. It is a little more touching
2007-03-06 16:15:07 · answer #3 · answered by Jack 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i would go with the first one. The concluding sentence is better.
2007-03-06 16:15:04 · answer #4 · answered by TGIF13 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
id go with the first one, it just sounds more official
2007-03-06 16:13:06 · answer #5 · answered by danigurl 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋