How should every girl be treated
As if without her you're not completed
And when her world is rocked with emotion
She should feel our unswaying devotion
And when she wants more and more
Still we'll hold that open door
And when her world is coming apart
She will know she still has our heart
Any girl who likes this, I would love for you to add me to your yahoo buddy list or IM me or something.
2007-03-06 01:40:30 · 3 answers · asked by dwsum41@yahoo.com 2 in Education & Reference ➔ Homework Help
Sorry -- no woman I know is interested in a guy who doesn't understand that meter is the most important part of poetry.
2007-03-06 01:46:14 · answer #1 · answered by Ranto 7 · 0⤊ 1⤋
It's a good poem, it has feeling which may be more important than meter.
Keep up the good work!
2007-03-06 09:49:23 · answer #2 · answered by mom of 2 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
How shold every girl be treated
Her right to vote should be deleted.
2007-03-06 10:26:34 · answer #3 · answered by rico3151 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋