Poem help!~!~!~!?

Question

okay well i need help writing one of my poems i really dont know what to do so here is the things it has to have (if u dont get it just ask and i will explain):

2 examples of: Alliteration
Onamatopeias
1. Metaphor/Similie
1. Other type of Figurative Language
Need 8-10 lines
Has to have a pattern

I would perferablly like to have the first and third line rhyme and than the third line doesnt but idk! here is some of my brainstorming:


about my hero
my brother
sticks out like a sore thumb
girly looking
geek
taught me everything i know
mainly raised me
always makes me laugh
not the best role model
tattos
piercings
goatee
long black hair
a yellow tulip in a field of rocks
appearances may be misleading
a listening ear in the time of need


umm... u dont have to write the whole poem just give me some ideas to help start it or end it....plz i cant think of any ideas

Answer 1

First advice: don't bother with rhyme. Modern poetry, at least the best of it, does not rhyme. So that helps a bit.

Now, not in order of how you might arrange these, but in order you asked:

Alliteration:

My brother: a bastion, a bulwark in blue jeans
Is he a geek, a girl, a goateed freak? (you can cite this also as internal vowel sounds, long ee)

Onomatopoeia:
Lanky black hair shushes over his tattoos
Chortling jokes to giggle away my tears

He may stick out like a sore thumb (that is your simile)
in your Starbucks sipping world (a metaphor, and alliteration)
but he is Sirius Black (another metaphor)
come to rescue me.

Not all heroes dress in white;
Though dressed in black he is my knight. ( rhymed couplet)

Now go and polish that up and see what you can do with it. You have everything you need. And you know what? I think he is lucky to have you for a sister.

Answer 2

Need Ideas?

This will give you plenty of ideas:

Whatever is not as "part, whole, equivalence, uniqueness, limit, link, sensation, influence, derivative, origin, condition, rule, intent, and fulfillment" is not unity.

Answer 3

You gotta be kidding...