2007-03-05 13:38:11 · 9 answers · asked by Anonymous in Education & Reference ➔ Words & Wordplay
Can you give me four line poem that talks negative about love (make it up)
2007-03-05 13:50:01 · update #1
Can you write me a poem that talks about love but in a negative way?
2007-03-05 13:56:51 · update #2
A metaphor is a direct comparison between two things that are otherwise not literally related.
For example:
-Love is a thorny rose
-Love is a deep abyss
-Love is a poisoned arrow
-Love is tainted wine
etc.
Note that all of the above were portraying love as something negative, like you asked.
2007-03-05 14:00:00 · answer #1 · answered by x_just_imagine 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Ah, thy love is an ache
It pains me, the way you make
My heart break and then after a while,
I smile.
Love is thought of as a pleasant experience, note in the first sentence love is compared to an ache. That's metaphor. I wrote this spur of the moment to answer the request for four lines. Poetry does not have to be long to convey its' point. Sometimes love is an ache and pain is the feeling that accompanies an otherwise pleasant experience. When we get through the tough times of love, we smile.
2007-03-05 14:07:05 · answer #2 · answered by TygerLily 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
a metaphor is a comparison without using the words like or as.
Eg: Your love shines brighter than the sun on a hot summer day.
2007-03-05 13:47:27 · answer #3 · answered by ace 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
a metaphor compares something to something else (doesnt use like or as, those are similes) often not literal. for ex., if there was a lot of traffic, you could say the espressway was a parking lot.
2007-03-05 13:42:38 · answer #4 · answered by kELY 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
a metaphor is a comparison of two things unlike things
Love is a dream
Love is not war
2007-03-05 13:44:47 · answer #5 · answered by tmitchell912 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
A methaphor is when you say something is something else. Love is a battlefield. Love is a heartache.
2007-03-05 13:42:46 · answer #6 · answered by Dorothy K. 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Shall I compare thee to a summer's day?
Thou art more lovely and more temperate.
--Shakespeare
2007-03-05 13:41:16 · answer #7 · answered by dBalcer 3 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Love stinks.
Yeah, yeah.
Good luck.
2007-03-05 13:47:12 · answer #8 · answered by Croa 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
YOU WILL LEARN AND REMEMBER MORE IF YOU DO THE RESEARCH...IF YOU DO NOT HAVE A GOOD GRAMMAR/ENGLISH BOOK, PLEASE GET ONE!
2007-03-05 13:56:13 · answer #9 · answered by Bettee62 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋