Well here is another Poem tell me if you like it or not?

Question

If your heart is set don't let it be set in stone for stone will crack one day instead let it be set in water where no fall is too harmful.
If your mind is stuck don't let it be stuck in a hole where the view is dim lighted instead let it be stuck in the sky where the view is well lit.
If your soul is buring with desire don't damper it with doubt instead enlighten it with encouragement so it can burn the brightest.

I hope everyone gets the metaphors

Answer 1

I like it..it is an upbeat poem, yet it still has a lot of meaning to it.

Answer 2

The thing is when you fall in water it CAN be harmful.
I appreciate what you are trying to say but it has come across a littel laboured. However it isn't my kind of poetry but I do know many people like these sort of ditties so don't be discouraged.

Answer 3

Can't say I like it.

Free verse is not always be free, and I find your word choice limited.