could some one please correc these sentences, unless they are right.?

Question

1: Spanish is her native language, English is her second language.
2: He reads French, but only speaks Spanish.
3: When I graded the sentence pattern quizzes I knew I had to reteach the lesson.
4. Because of the expense the project seemed impossible.
5. The tall ships sailed up the river and the people on the shore cheered.
6. You must learn this material; you will need it in the future.
7. Women's schools first appeared in the 1820; however Mount Holyoke, the first women's college, did not open until 1837.
8. Too often the proper fire precautions are not taken until a tragedy has occurred.
9. Even though Irving Berlin was born in Russia he wrote "God Bless America".
10. Sad movies interest me depressing books do not.
11. Our attorney will have to subpoena the landlord because he will not testify.

Answer 1

Sorry I already passed 4th grade.
Pay some asian kid to do it for you.

Answer 2

1: Spanish is her native language. English is her second language.
2: He reads French, but only speaks Spanish.
3: When I graded the sentence pattern quizzes, I knew I had to reteach the lesson.
4. Because of the expense, the project seemed impossible.
5. The tall ships sailed up the river, and the people on the shore cheered.
6. You must learn this material. You will need it in the future.
7. Women's schools first appeared in the 1820; however, Mount Holyoke, the first women's college, did not open until 1837.
8. Too often, the proper fire precautions are not taken until a tragedy has occurred.
9. Even though Irving Berlin was born in Russia, he wrote "God Bless America".
10. Sad movies interest me. Depressing books do not.
11. Our attorney will have to subpoena the landlord because he will not testify.

I think those are right now. Not sure about the ones with semicolons. Did i just do your homework though?? I don't really care. :) Bored at work. I like editing sentences.

Answer 3

1: Spanish is her native language; English is her second language.
2: He reads French, but only speaks Spanish.
3: When I graded the sentence pattern quizzes, I knew I had to reteach the lesson.
4. Because of the expense, the project seemed impossible.
5. The tall ships sailed up the river and the people on the shore cheered.
6. You must learn this material; you will need it in the future.
7. Women's schools first appeared in the 1820's; however, Mount Holyoke, the first women's college, did not open until 1837.
8. Too often, the proper fire precautions are not taken until a tragedy has occurred.
9. Even though Irving Berlin was born in Russia, he wrote, "God Bless America."
10. Sad movies interest me; depressing books do not.
11. Our attorney will have to subpoena the landlord because he will not testify.

Answer 4

3. When I graded the the sentence pattern quizzes, I knew I had to reteach the lesson.
4. Due to the expense, the project seemed impossible.
7. Womens' schools first appeared in the 1820's. However, Mount Holyoke, the first women's college, did not open till 1837.
9. Even though Irving Berlin was born in Russia, he wrote, "God Bless America".
10. Sad movies interest me; depressing books do not.

Answer 5

4. Because of the expense the project seemed impossible.

> The thing with this sentence is: should "expense" be plural or singular? My guess with this is it should be plural: "Because of the expenses, the project seemed impossible."


7. Women's schools first appeared in the 1820; however Mount Holyoke, the first women's college, did not open until 1837.

"Women's schools first appeared in the 1820s; however, Mount Holyoke, the first women's college, did not open until 1837."
or why not use 2 sentences?
"Women's schools first appeared in the 1820s. However, Mount Holyoke, the first women's college, did not open until 1837."


10. Sad movies interest me depressing books do not.
"Sad movies interest me; depressing books do not."
Or split it into two sentences.


11. Our attorney will have to subpoena the landlord because he will not testify.

This sentence could be considered wrong because the subject of the sentence (the noun doing the action) is the attorney. But it is the landlord who will not testify, so you're using "he" as the pronoun for the landlord. This can be unclear to the reader if he/she does not know the meaning of landlord, subpoena, and testify.
"Because the landlord will not testify our attorney will have to subpoena him."

Answer 6

7. Women's schools first appeared in 1820 however, Mount Holyoke, the first women's college, did not open until 1837.

9. Even though Irving Berlin was born in Russia, he wrote "God Bless America".

10. Sad movies interest me, depressing books do not.

The rest make sense to me.

Answer 7

I can't do your homework for you, but I will tell you that there are errors in most of them. Number 2 looks right, and I am pretty sure 11 is right. Pay attention to commas in several. One of them should be two separate sentences....
If you put in the time and effort to learn this stuff, it will help you all through school. It's something you will actually use in the real world, as well.

Answer 8

1. I would use a ; instead of a ,
2. is fine
3. , after quizzes,
4. expense,
5 is OK, optional comma after river,
6. is OK
7. perfect
8. is OK, optional comma after often,
9. Russia,
10. me;
11. perfect

Answer 9

7. Women's schools first appeared in the 1820; however Mount Holyoke, the first women's college, did not open until 1837.

There should not be a 'the' before 1820

10. Sad movies interest me depressing books do not.

There should bea comma between me and depressing.

Apart from that its all fine!

Answer 10

This site ought to ban all school aged kids!!

Do your own homework! How in the heck do you ever plan to learn a thing by CHEATING

Answer 11

2 no comma