i have to write a story to go on from:
I sat huddled as far as possible underneath the hedge. The frantic rain attacked my bitterly cold hands. My coat, soaked through, had become a heavy weight and soon I was left shivering. I could see the sun beginning to set and knew soon it would become even colder. Looking across the field I saw silhouettes in the distance. Could it be them? Were they coming back for me? I looked around again but there had vanished. I tired to convince myself that they would return.
As the sun lowered in the sky and the temperature plummeted I became afraid.
Any ideas? (that begining can be changed slightly)
Thank you
2007-03-05 07:01:15 · 5 answers · asked by me m 1 in Education & Reference ➔ Homework Help
change things like hands and make it a puppy abandoned although make the reader think its a scared person who see's strange things and at end the reader realises aw it was sad lost puppy and he got rescued
ending ... the shadows came closer but now i see they are smiling im feeling a lot warmer now i got a good feed and lots to drink but this tail of mine is really annoying i just can't stop it wagging (well mine sounds corny but you get the gist)
2007-03-05 07:05:23 · answer #1 · answered by Nutty Girl 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
As the fog began to drop, there was a hazy white light in the distance. My eyes, though stinging with the cold became drawn to it, then, suddenly, it went pitch black.
I must have been unconsciece for a good few minutes, because when I awoke, I was surrounded by these unusual creatures, green in colour & very ugly. They started to prod me all over, they shuffled about, mumbling as they went.....xxx
2007-03-05 07:28:55 · answer #2 · answered by Joanne W 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Hoping that they would be back soon, with the food we all needed, I felt deep hunger worsening my misery.
2 days ago, a bank robbery involving somebody who looked like the person speaking.
The police had called at her home while she was out.
She turns up at a friend's house and while there the other friend phones to say police etc etc.
On the run.
etc.
HTH LOL
2007-03-05 07:11:04 · answer #3 · answered by R.E.M.E. 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Could be aliens looking for you as you spotted them landing on the open moors, they might want to take you back with them? Of blot your memory of having seen them?
2007-03-05 09:02:51 · answer #4 · answered by worriedmum 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
bullies hunting you down,
thugs hunting you down,
the people who know your deepest secret?
2007-03-05 07:07:22 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋