How should every girl be treated
As if without her you're not completed
And when her world is rocked with emotion
She should feel our unswaying devotion
And when she wants more and more
Still we'll hold that open door
And when her world is coming apart
She will know she still has our heart
I hope this get's the attention of the right girl so she will contact me too
2007-03-05 06:28:23 · 7 answers · asked by dwsum41@yahoo.com 2 in Society & Culture ➔ Other - Society & Culture
i have read it. sorry i am taken
2007-03-05 06:32:06 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
You show some promise, IF you mean what you write here. But, to be a great husband, it is not just the words, its the actions beyond the words. Can you do that. To you, I am an old chic, and I am happily married. But, I just had to tell you I do hope you mean this and will live accordingly so. If a man is for real and treats His wife like God says to, He will treat her like a queen, and he then becomes like a king to her. mutual love and respect and devotion. There is no other way to go. But, be careful who contacgts you, not everone is for real, especially on here.
Press on dude. May you find what it is God wants you to find. and be truly blessed.
2007-03-05 14:35:14 · answer #2 · answered by full gospel shirley 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I was with you up until holding the door open part.
i do not see the connection between that and the girl wanting more and more.
Also when her world is coming apart. whats that about. Is she dying or something.
If she is dying to be so quick to let her continue to have your heart cause if you are in tooooo much trouble she might just want to come back and take you away from you pain. i.e. kill you.
Nice thought though
2007-03-05 14:36:34 · answer #3 · answered by Osunwole Adeoyin 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
haha. Cool poem!
2007-03-05 14:34:42 · answer #4 · answered by R.S. 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Awwww.. That's sweet!!!
2007-03-05 14:33:20 · answer #5 · answered by Valkyrie of Lor 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Wah, wah, wah.....sorry wrong question....try again....
Nice poem tho.
2007-03-05 14:35:00 · answer #6 · answered by aurorase 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I'm impressed.
2007-03-05 14:33:13 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋