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How should every girl be treated
As if without her you're not completed
And when her world is rocked with emotion
She should feel our unswaying devotion
And when she wants more and more
Still we'll hold that open door
And when her world is coming apart
She will know she still has our heart

I hope this get's the attention of the right girl so she will contact me too

2007-03-05 06:27:55 · 4 answers · asked by dwsum41@yahoo.com 2 in Entertainment & Music Polls & Surveys

4 answers

what? i cant read that!

2007-03-05 06:30:23 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0 0

That is beautiful poetry.......I really like that poem. I am a writter too.
When I find him,
the right man,
l`ll do whatever I can to keep my man,
who lights my life, hopefully someday,I`ll be his wife.
Im like a flame and he makes me stronger,
like hes fanning me for ever longer, He keeps me lit,
and I will burn,
with his love I will always yearn.
He will have made my flame,
and it will burn. Until time stops or we die,
and we will fly up in the cosmos in the sky.
For the rest of time we float together. in the world is where we met eachehter.


(okay eachether isnt a word but its supposed to be like eachother.)

2007-03-05 15:01:18 · answer #2 · answered by Starshine 4 · 0 0

yeah i read it.

2007-03-05 14:32:05 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0 0

Ah how sweet............:)

2007-03-05 14:31:27 · answer #4 · answered by tictak kat 7 · 0 0

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