its a story about paganism (about demons and stuff) a scary story but i thing i was on a good path with it, i just want to know if there are people that would want to read it and see if its any good, please help me with anything Errors and anything that you think is a good idea. if you want to read it please give me your e-mail address or i can give you mine buit i really need help with this project.
2007-03-05 05:40:09 · 4 answers · asked by dfrost16 1 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Books & Authors
as a writer I don't agree that friends and family are the best to read your story. Those who love you will not find anything bad about your writing.
I'll be glad to give you a critique. please put "Yahoo critique" in the subject line so I don't delete the email
wckeesey@comcast.net
2007-03-05 05:57:11 · answer #1 · answered by Wanda K 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
First, have you actually done any research for your story? I take it the answer is "no", because if you do you would know that paganism has nothing to do with "demons and stuff."
If you want real help, you should demonstrate your sincerity by at least having the courtesy to prove to potential reviewers that you know how to construct a complete sentence. If you can barely construct a sentence in a question, how am I suppose to be able to determine if I could even tolerate reading your complete manuscript? You are asking people to volunarily grant you their valuable time, show them respect by posting your question in something that is readable and coherent.
2007-03-05 15:11:50 · answer #2 · answered by bardsandsages 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Best readers can be your family, friends or even a teacher you like and ask them if they like or not and why.
2007-03-05 13:51:46 · answer #3 · answered by bilway2001 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
crazycrapper@hotmail.com
2007-03-05 13:46:16 · answer #4 · answered by doody goal 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋