so far, it starts off describing a very boring school and some of thge students, including an overlooked teen, who will turn out to be an unexpected friend. so far, all i have after the descriptopns is the girl taking an after schoool trip by herself out of state. this is where i need some ideas. i think the girl is going visit a friend who moved without getting permission or anything but im not sure where i want the story to lead. i want the trip to lead to the climax of the story, any sugegstions or ideas would be appreciated. thanks
2007-03-05 03:50:45 · 5 answers · asked by simplicity 2 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Books & Authors
I think the best thing for you to do would be to add a little advinture to your story. Have something happen, mybe something dangerous to your main charactor and have this overlooked teen help her/him out. I think that the idea of the overlooked teen becoming a friend is a good one. Play on that and find a way to make them friends. You could also add some romance or something. Maybe a secret cruch.
Another good idea to help cure writer's block is to just start writing. Get a sheet of paper (or 2 or 3) and just sit down and write straight for 10 minutes, 20, or longer. Write down anything that comes to your mind about your story. Write down ideas that pop into your mind, even if they seem silly. It may help. Good luck! ;-)
2007-03-05 05:41:13 · answer #1 · answered by cluckder 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
If the girl is a teenager how does she go "by herself" out of the state? She may be going to visit her aunt, or her grandma, who is very fun and good, although she is not very familiar to the other part of the family. I don't know, it sounds good...
Tell me more about the story. Why is she going out of the state? Is she trying to avoid someone or to escape something? If yes, that grandma thing is really good...
Please tell me what did you decided, I'm dieing to know...
P.S. I read your question about the 13-15years old guyes... I'm at that age and I'll be very happy someone to write a letter for me... But without all these mawkish "I love you" and "I dream you every night". It's stupid to love and be loved at 13... Just say your real feelings. "I like you very much. Do you want to be my boyfriend?" should be fine.
2007-03-05 05:14:54 · answer #2 · answered by Jerey 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
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2016-11-27 23:22:52 · answer #3 · answered by ? 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
How old are the girls? In what state are they? Why don't they want/need permission?
2007-03-05 03:54:53 · answer #4 · answered by Anpadh 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
will i have a percentage profit if ever i decide to help you ? if not then i could sue you when published
so far it looks plain and bidimensional
2007-03-05 04:02:57 · answer #5 · answered by aenasc 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋