any topic, about a paragraph long, with lots of feeling and good vocabulary. PLEASE i need it tonight!! thanks
2007-03-04 16:33:38 · 9 answers · asked by Erin M 1 in Education & Reference ➔ Homework Help
"write me a poem"
will someone write me a poem?
please please please?
it's late Sunday night,
i am on my knees!
i forgot about my homework
i didn't mean to do it
i was cleaning my room
and i didn't get to it!
all i need is a paragraph,
with feeling and vocabulary
i can't think of anything,
and it's getting quite scary
i need it tonight
just some help from one friend
and i promise i promise
this won't happen again!
have a nice day.
2007-03-04 17:00:33 · answer #1 · answered by sharrron 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
A friend to me be will always be. some one nice, helpful and full of glee. A friend is always at my side, in the winter cold or the summer heat. A friend helps when I need advise. He shares our secrets with great pride. A friends buys a shirt and lets me wear it. He does my homework when I can get it. A friend is all I really need. Besides my family. I don't need more than one. A friend goes through life with me, the road to a friends house is never too long. The door is always open. ( This is just a suggestion, maybe you can make something of it, it is getting too late for me).
2007-03-05 00:42:58 · answer #2 · answered by ruth4526 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I wrote this myself about a month ago:
Waiting to see someone but no one is there
Sitting without a care
At the same time feeling caught
Listening to the sounds of my thoughts
Talking to myself
Just about to melt
Feelings can’t be felt
Crying inside
Nowhere to hide
Running from my feelings
Incapable of healing
Life is in slow motion
Unable to hide my emotion
Knowing something is wrong
It’s been this way for so long
2007-03-05 00:54:47 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
what you need to do is to just start writing about something you love. use the thesaurus to help you with the vocabulary issue. if you try to rhyme a little that will help with flow, but don't over-do it.
sorry, but i already wrote my poems in high school... I'm not going through that again.
2007-03-05 00:37:41 · answer #4 · answered by christy 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
you are extremely lazy you need to write the poem yourself not ask people to do everything for you its not that hard to write ONE PARAGRAPH poem.
2007-03-05 01:15:35 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Maybe I dont really want to know,
How your garden grows,
Cause I just want to fly.
Lately did you ever feel the pain,
Of the morning rain,
That soaks you to the bone.
2007-03-05 00:55:49 · answer #6 · answered by peaco1000 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Roses are red,
Voilets are blue,
When you're in Russia,
Poem write you!
2007-03-05 00:44:10 · answer #7 · answered by politoed316 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
oh please were not doing your school assignment that you put off by being a procrastinator!!!
Roses are Red,
Violets are Blue,
Don't procrastinate,
And do your school!!!
its tough love baby!
2007-03-05 00:43:53 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
no
2007-03-05 00:36:19 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋