You don't know anything about me; not even my name.
I've tried to be nice; but I wanna be in your game.
You may think, I never hear the things that you say.
I'm telling you too your face, word travels fast.
I am standing here behind your back.
Do you know how it feels, to be outisde a crowd?
You don't even know what its like to be left out.
You dont know how it feels to be your own best friend.
And you've been wrong; I'm not who you think I am.
But you have never given me a chance.
You might see more of me than meets the eye.
If only you could read my mind.
2007-03-04 16:30:30 · 8 answers · asked by emidy88 1 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
I think you have a wonderful way with expressing yourself..too many people these days have sooo many issues to deal with,and always are too caught up with everyday life totake care of their innerself.Expression means freedom of thought,mind and soul....NEVER stop expressing the inner you...It's a very beautiful poem sweetie !! Just like the inner you!!!
2007-03-04 16:38:59 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Well for the most part it sounds like a life experience, and those are always good to write about, but it seems like you're just saying the words, I'm sure if you put more depth and feeling into it. It can show more of what you're really feeling. It's a good poem though it just needs the more feeling into it then it will be a great one.
2007-03-05 00:38:36 · answer #2 · answered by Demonology 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Wow girl, that is a nice poem and I'm guessing you are writing from the heart. I would let you in my crowd any day!! Keep up the good writing, I think you have a knack for it.
2007-03-05 00:37:13 · answer #3 · answered by Mustang Sally 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Beautiful!
2007-03-05 00:33:38 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I really like that alot.Alot of sadness.
2007-03-05 00:36:19 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like it it is very good!!
2007-03-05 00:36:19 · answer #6 · answered by Michelle S 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I Like !! High Five !!
2007-03-05 00:34:18 · answer #7 · answered by Pixie 4 · 0⤊ 1⤋
I like it... ALOT... â¥
2007-03-05 00:34:16 · answer #8 · answered by Wiked 5 · 0⤊ 1⤋