Opinions on my poetry please?

Question

Where can I place my ecstasy?
There’s too much to handle,
There’s too much for me,
I need some sanity,
But not for too long,
Cause in truth,
I really like singing this song,
The one about our unity,
And how you tainted my ideal,
Tainted me,
My dormant intimacy,
An amazing invasion,
Of what can be,
And I can see,
A crescendo of our yearnings.

Answer 1

Even though it is free verse, you need to pay a little more attention to meter... it could flow better.

Answer 2

I tend to like it.

Answer 3

loss of virginity? uhhh it was ok, it doesnt have much special to it though...i dunno ill read i a few times over see if anything makes an impression