We are writing poems in language arts and we are supposed to write about any random object. I chose a contrail (don't ask why) and I have a pretty good poem. I have this:
"Slowly disappearing
Like......"
I don't know what to relate it to. What "slowly disapears" in any books or movies or anything like that?
2007-03-04 14:06:32 · 3 answers · asked by Anonymous in Education & Reference ➔ Homework Help
I just came up with this one, but I need helpo perfecting it:
"Slowly disappearing
Like Mary's photograph"
It's relating to Marty's picture of his brothers in Back to the Future. Any better way of putting it?
2007-03-04 14:24:33 · update #1
I made a typo, that is MARTY'S photograph, not Mary's!
2007-03-04 14:25:15 · update #2
like fog blanketing a lake.
like the stars as day breaks
as the sun sets into the sea
like my ideas for more answers to your question.
2007-03-04 14:16:02 · answer #1 · answered by Rich 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Snow melting, the sun setting, childhood innocence...etc
2007-03-04 14:10:37 · answer #2 · answered by eschampion 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
i would make it hit hard and hit home for everybody on earth and say- "slowly disappearing like earth'
earth being the relation to "slowly disappearing".
2007-03-04 14:19:25 · answer #3 · answered by Ghost Drift 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋