MY LUCKY DIME
I walked in a store,
With my lucky dime,
When I saw on the floor,
A twenty, that's now mine.
I carried it in my pocket,
In my faded jeans,
Whenever I played cards,
I would always win with queens.
One day, I was walking,
It was cold, so I shivered,
When my dime fell out from shaking,
It plopped into a river.
My luck was lost,
Forever it was gone,
I couldn't sleep that night,
With my eyes open until dawn.
I couldn't find any money,
I lost at every game,
Without my lucky dime,
My luck was never the same.
2007-03-04 13:38:21 · 21 answers · asked by ivory_plr 4 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
Thats pretty good..keep it up.I was kinda hopin the end was going to find
In Time
a replacement
for your
Lost
Lucky Dime...
Good Work!!
2007-03-04 13:44:09 · answer #1 · answered by tpasenelli 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Love it. Almost makes me want to be sad, But I can't. Hope you get a million dimes. And a star from me.
2007-03-04 21:43:42 · answer #2 · answered by LAUGHING MAGPIE 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Hey that's cute. Kudos to you. And if I could I would give you my dime.
2007-03-04 21:50:50 · answer #3 · answered by thmsnbrgll 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
That is very good young lady.....in the coffee shops they don't clap they wave their hands in the air like sign language people....see my hands waving???? wave wave
2007-03-12 21:29:03 · answer #4 · answered by missellie 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's sad, funny, cool, and warming at the same time.
Very good!
2007-03-04 21:42:17 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
The beginning was good, but I am not expert.
2007-03-04 21:41:49 · answer #6 · answered by It's been awhile 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
You should publish it! It's great!
2007-03-12 20:45:42 · answer #7 · answered by kibbs 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Its Great.
2007-03-04 21:42:12 · answer #8 · answered by Dr. Nick 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
You do have a talent with words.
2007-03-04 21:42:59 · answer #9 · answered by sharen d 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I really liked it...very original!!
2007-03-04 21:42:10 · answer #10 · answered by ξℓ Çђαηφσ 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋