Presumably, by the time you reach "Secondly" you should have established that you are talking about students, so I would say, Secondly, we don't have....
Other words for stay: like to remain indoors.
and fun: we had some great times.
The key to writing is to keep it simple. If you put in too many big words to replace obvious ones like stay and fun, your reader is going to pick up on it and it won't seem as natural.
The less words you use to get your point across the better. Mark Twain or someone on his level said something like that.
2007-03-04 12:44:21
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answer #1
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answered by John P 6
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We.
Stay indoors;relax inside,remain in the nest, recharge at home, stop to rejuvenate hibernate.
Fun times; good times, pleasant moments,milestones in the memory,a blast,... I don't know.
2007-03-04 20:44:27
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answered by plaplant8 5
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Secondly, we students don't have enough time to..... is correct.
stay....remain,
fun....whale of a time
like someone said, try using simple words and similies.
2007-03-04 21:20:29
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answered by Anonymous
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Ok, first of all: You misspelled "begginning" (it's beginning) and also "scentence" (it's sentence).
"We" students is correct, not us.
Instead of "stay" use "remain."
2007-03-04 20:42:07
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answered by 60s Chick 6
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neither...
you can say Secondly, we as students do not have enough time to.... (try to stay from don't can't etc... contractions i think theyare called... can not do not etc would be way better if your writing an essay)
2007-03-05 00:15:01
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answered by Anonymous
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We students is correct.
stay - reman
fun - enjoyable
beginning
sentence.
2007-03-04 20:41:32
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answered by ra63 6
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when in doubt, consult the dictionary, or thesaurus.
Secondly, consult the proper english handbook
Well, anyway, that is what MY teachers always told me.
2007-03-04 20:43:33
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answer #7
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answered by Katykins 5
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STAY=REMAIN FUN=WONDERFUL TIME AND WE OR US REALLY DOES NOT MATTER
2007-03-04 20:43:39
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answered by ellis c 1
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i think it should be "us students", and remain would be a substitute to stay don't you think
2007-03-04 20:41:20
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answered by no_bsht 2
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stay- remain
fun- enjoyable
2007-03-04 20:42:42
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answered by fr8tr 1
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