i have written part of a story but i dont think its very good. Has anyone got any ideas?
The story so far is about a cat which lives on a farm at the edge of a forest. Miller is the owner of the farm. Mouse teaches other mice about the "dangers" of being mice but gets caught by the cat. One night there is a blinding purple light and either it changes all the animals so they can talk to humans and each other or its the end of the world. heres an extract: "There was a flash of purple light which expanded to a great range across Huntington Forest and to Millers farm. The majestic horses shied away, trying to get away from the blinding light. Every living thing attempted to escape the beam, most failed. The once hushed darkness turned into a shrill of animal noises in a flash of light" The story is told from 3rd person and changes to the characters point of veiw. If that makes sense. thanks!!
2007-03-04 05:44:34 · 5 answers · asked by ♥_Anya_♥ 2 in Education & Reference ➔ Homework Help
should i end it as the end of the world or animals talking? any other endings?
2007-03-04 05:52:00 · update #1
I think the animals should be able to talk to humans! That would be really cool. Next you should write about them losing their ability and them suddenly waking up from their dream. They should talk together at the end and say that they all had the same dream!!! FREAKY! :)
2007-03-04 05:51:43 · answer #1 · answered by Michelle 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Sounds good so far, how about only the animals that did manage to escape the light survive, some are driven insane - the mouse who was caught being one of them, and the take revenge on the cat.
2007-03-04 06:13:52 · answer #2 · answered by Cherry 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Wow - a puzzling mix of matters i think of. it must be much less puzzling to do it from the point of view of a tiger shark possibly, talk effect on the oceans of overfishing and worldwide warming - which in turn is endangering/killing coral reefs - which make up the start of the shark's ecosystem it needs for survival. the precise predators of the nutrition chain are a solid indicator of an ecosystem's wellbeing. that's much less puzzling to tie interior the potential subject right here with the ought to stability potential intake that produces the emissions contributing to the worldwide warming. See! Ummm - think of i could bypass Dune for this project nevertheless :o)
2016-10-02 09:08:53 · answer #3 · answered by ? 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Sounds interesting to me. One thing great stories have is details. Make sure you make it clear what things sound like, feel like.
2007-03-04 05:48:07 · answer #4 · answered by scrabblemaven 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
use the info. It mkes sense
2007-03-04 05:49:46 · answer #5 · answered by BRONx 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋