im writing about this guy that fell in love with this girl but somehow he discover that shes a hooker but not yet.. now shes walking on the sidewalk he told her to get in and she did and he mad that she was walking in the middle of the night now hes mad driving in range..shes embarrased because she thinks that he know what she doing but he doesnt know yet..(she havent felt this way about a guy in a while she never had somebody that make sure shes alright and worry about her) now they made love but how do i explain what happen when they made love who went at it first?
2007-03-04 03:35:24 · 2 answers · asked by Anonymous in Education & Reference ➔ Homework Help
Well, you don't need to exactly describe it. Just have the characters talking about it so that the reader can infer what happened.
Or, you can have the girl thinking about it. She can realize that this is the first time she has actually felt something for the person (since she is a hooker).
If you really want to describe it, then just write the whole scene.
2007-03-04 03:40:49 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
So, here's how I see this story.
Boy loves girl.
Boy doesn't know that she's a prostitute.
Girl walking alone at night
Boy cares for her and thus tries to get her to a safer place by picking her up.
Boy is really pissed about her walking, but she thinks he knows already.
Girl is in a difficult situation because no boy has ever cared for her this way.
They make love...
Your question: How do you explain what happen when the made love?
Answer: She feels embarrassed and he was mad, so have him console her while she's crying. Then, they hug each other, start to kiss...etc...they make love...
AND THEN...while they are making love, he spots a guys wallet laying on the floor, and it is revealed to him that she's really a cheater!
2007-03-04 11:43:02 · answer #2 · answered by mysstere 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋