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Lucretia Mott, an active Quaker minister during the antislavery movement who fought for the equal rights of African-Americans and women was a Hicksite Quaker. This meant she considered slavery to be immoral and believed it should be abolished. These beliefs, along with the death of one of her children, led her to speak at multiple Quaker meetings which helped her cope with her son’s death and spread her beliefs to other Quakers. Her persuasive speeches allowed her to be recognized by others, including Elizabeth Stanton and Susan B, Anthony, who convinced her to speak at and organize numerous anti-slavery and women’s rights conventions.

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Lucretia Mott was a Hicksite Quaker minister who campaigned for the equal rights of African-Americans and women during the anti-slavery movement. She considered slavery to be immoral and believed it should be abolished. These beliefs, combined with the untimely death of one of her children, compelled her to speak at multiple Quaker meetings which helped her cope with her son’s death and spread her beliefs to other Quakers. Her persuasive speeches afforded her recognition among other freedom fighters including Elizabeth Stanton and Susan B, Anthony who convinced her to speak at and organize numerous anti-slavery and women’s rights conventions.

I added some words in and took some out, but it kept the general meaning. Nice paragraph, much better than what I usually see at school... hope this helps you out!