done 4. i have to do 2 more, and i want to do just 2 more and not exceed 6 pages coz i'm lazy. now i'm totally lost and dont know how to continue it. she's supposed to have a vision or something in the last part.
http://www.geocities.com/alexpotter_252004/story.doc
2007-03-03 20:47:41 · 6 answers · asked by draconic_eirein 2 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Books & Authors
the best way is to ask yourself.
1. who?
2. what?
3. where?
4. how?
5. why?
answer all these questions and you'll get more than 6 page.
2007-03-03 20:53:08 · answer #1 · answered by tsunami 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
You basically can't write. Your story has ZERO structure, ZERO plot, and ZERO conflict. Every story is centered around a problem that needs to be resolved (that's called a conflict). Someone (characters) must resolve the conflict, to end the story. The action (what people do so that the conflict is resolved) makes up the story.
Your story, right now, just drifts, aimlessly. Making extra spaces between lines isn't going to make your story better or even longer. If you did that in my class, I would automatically take off a letter grade for not doing the work and trying to fool me!
2007-03-04 03:43:38 · answer #2 · answered by Anpadh 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
one subject that I do this actually helps me I consistently have a workstation with me whenevr I arise with something no remember what that's I positioned it finished in there. I additionally take notes on human beings and how they act while i'm out. department shops and airports are the suitable places i hit upon do try this at. additionally i visit in simple terms sit down finished for like 20 minutes at a time and in simple terms write no longer hassle approximately spelling grammar in simple terms write. then you definitely piece the story together later when you have an thought the way you decide on it. anymore questions you could email me.
2016-10-02 08:48:37 · answer #3 · answered by ? 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I can't read a story. Are you doing writing exercises right now? Just think of something that you'd like to write about. Like, if somebody you love gave you HIV, what would you do? Something that would give some dilemma to the characters.
2007-03-04 03:55:34 · answer #4 · answered by nausea guy 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
looks like she's already had the vision in the first part of the story... perhaps tie the nightmare in with the realization that the girls she dreamed about are people she knows who are going through a rough time?
2007-03-03 20:56:30 · answer #5 · answered by kiwibryntoo 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Be a bit more descriptive? I can't add much to the plot... >_<
2007-03-03 20:58:05 · answer #6 · answered by kawaiisuzakuwarrior 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋