I'm doing a report on dancing, and need help writing a summary...this is what I wrote?? Can anyone give me any suggestions on how to improve this...i desperately need help!!! Thanks.
This study was to explore the many benefits of dancing. The investigation was done by observing a dance group, interviewing members, and collecting data from surveys. The main finding were that dancing, aside from being fun, is also an excellent method of physical fitness. I think everyone should know the benefits of dancing, such as improving circulation and toning muscles which leads to increase strength, endurance, and flexibility. It was concluded that dancing not only has many benefits but also teaches new skills.
2007-03-03 16:45:45 · 4 answers · asked by Anonymous in Education & Reference ➔ Homework Help
The last answer was GREAT but I have to keep my audience in mind..adolescents and parents..
2007-03-04 01:53:38 · update #1
Hi Mella,
I'm currently an author for a major American book collaboration, a recent graduate, and. . . find your question very intriguing.
So, I collaborated your resources into three categories as follows; Dancing : Physical Fitness : Flexibility
After a few moments of pondering . . . here is what I came up with;
This study was to explore the many benefits of dancing. The investigation was done by observing a dance group, interviewing members, and collecting data from surveys. After an extensive collaboration of resources many found that dancing derived from two processes of the human body. These processes are physical fitness and the exacerbation of excitement. Examples of numerous important benefits to dancing include; movement, circulation, pronation and supination of major muscle groups and an increase of strength over extended periods of time. Accumulation of these factors led to increase strength, endurance, and flexibility. In conclusion the benefits of dancing compound with new skills and the beautiful physique of the human body.
I hope you find this helpful, good luck in your endeavors.
~ Chris
2007-03-03 18:52:33 · answer #1 · answered by christopher 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
What you wrote is good but you have to add that it will give mental relaxation. For the youngsters dancing will give relief to their tensions also. And will get good mental health.
2007-03-03 16:52:55 · answer #2 · answered by sunlight 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i think this is a fine summary.
go with it!
good job!
have a nice day!
2007-03-03 16:48:14 · answer #3 · answered by sharrron 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
go with wat u believe is right
2007-03-03 17:32:10 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋