Are you ok
Mommy died when she had you,
Are you ok,
Do you want to talk about it,
Daddy had a heart-a-tack 10 years later,
Are you ok,
Do you want to talk about it,
Brother went to jail 5 years later,
Are you ok,
Do you want to talk about it,
Sister toke you in,
Are you ok,
Do you want to talk about it,
Sis got married 5 years later,
Are you ok,
Do you want tot talk about it,
You move out,
Get married,
Have twins,
Are you ok,
2007-03-03 15:10:16 · 15 answers · asked by candy 2 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Music
Aww...is this about your life?...if it is ..it is very deep, touching and real...moving, passionate, and beautiful!
If it's not..it's very clear, helpful, teary, and dedicated!
2007-03-03 15:12:58 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like the song. The only thing I see is that you keep asking, are you ok and do you want to talk about it to many times. See if you can leave a few out. Other than that it's good.
Good luck: Blueladybug
2007-03-03 15:16:01 · answer #2 · answered by Blueladybug 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's not totally good but I think it's oky. It's just that it's sad. Which sometimes I can't handle. Well, It's very good! nvm bout the first sentence it's good! keep working on your other songs!
2007-03-03 15:13:16 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Are you okay really sounds like things are getting better towards the end are you OKAY???Do you want to talk about it?
2007-03-03 15:14:06 · answer #4 · answered by ____ 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Sucks.
2007-03-03 15:12:49 · answer #5 · answered by daisyvb_1993 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
ok, it's not that bad, but heat attackisnt spelled heat-a-tack
well.......i'm not into the whole country music thing, and this seems like country to me, you just need a little practice, thats all, maybe if i heard it sung, idk! just keep writing, i want to see more, and see you improve! =]
2007-03-03 15:14:27 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
no ofense but tahts not that great i mean it doesnt have a rythm fr me
2007-03-03 15:12:43 · answer #7 · answered by neno_93 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
it's a nice song. sounds country-ish.
2007-03-03 15:12:36 · answer #8 · answered by green sky means run 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
its horriable sorry it doesn;t even make sense and i hate when it says are u okay its just dumb
2007-03-03 15:18:43 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Not that great. It's pretty cliche.
2007-03-03 15:21:05 · answer #10 · answered by wings_of_imagination 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋