A single red rose rests upon a grand piano, reveling in its own delicate beauty. The room contains no walls; its boundaries are limitless. A rich, midnight black is presents throughout the atmosphere. Though the room exists boundless, the rose possesses a divine aura, which blossoms in the eyes of many. It signifies a vast number of things… A petal dropped for Loneliness… A petal shed for Hope… A petal given for Romance… A petal kept for Solitude… Yet, somewhere, amidst all of its meanings, lays a hushed heavenly elegance.
http://www.acclaimimages.com/_gallery/_TN/0018-0505-0907-5444_TN.jpg
______________________________...
Please give me an honest critique. Yes, I realize the rose is classic and may seem to you overused.. Put that aside and pretend the rose is still meaningful to you if you feel this way. The paragraph is meant to describe and evoke a feeling about the essence of the photgraph...
Please be honest in what you think.. Thank you!!
2007-03-03 14:02:23 · 4 answers · asked by Kiara 5 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
your on a roll.
2007-03-03 14:07:41 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 1⤋
Wow...This is really good! I think you should make it a little longer, that is if you want to. If not, then I think it is just wonderful the way it is!
2007-03-03 22:22:39 · answer #2 · answered by ilyy 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i think the way you described it is very beautiful. it's a nice paragraph. good job. :)
2007-03-03 22:15:57 · answer #3 · answered by shellbee 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
The whole thing made me confussed. :( Sorry.
2007-03-03 22:13:59 · answer #4 · answered by Me 6 · 0⤊ 2⤋