im writting a story/play/screenplay... it will soon be put into production. this is kinda taboo but,
story line so far is:
highschool sophomore has crush on her teacher. she has an A in his class. he likes her too but is an adult and too smart to do anything about it (at the moment.). she drops out and becomes a prostitute. they meet later on. and end up falling in love.
i dunno what to put in between or afterwards.
(((i know this is kinda taboo...well, VERY taboo, but thats the point of writting it, as in... what if it wasnt taboo for this sort of thing to happen?)))
any ideas as to what to add or suggestions, ideas i can add into it or into the storyline would help me alot.
thank you!
2007-03-03 13:59:20 · 10 answers · asked by Veritesirum 3 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Books & Authors
no, nooooo....
she doesnt have straight As...
only ONE "A", in HIS class...
2007-03-04 05:29:38 · update #1
thanks everyone.
i really appreciate it.
2007-03-04 15:36:37 · update #2
well, first... it's spelled "writing".
good luck, tho.
2007-03-03 14:03:24 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
First off, don't claim a script is going to be put into production before you even have it finished. Doesn't happen. It can take years for a finished script to make the rounds and then be put into production. For an example of the history of a script, check out Secondhand Lions and watch the extras.
Having gotten that out of the way, I suggest you have your heroine become an exotic dancer instead of a prostitute. More acceptable in Hollywood and exotics make better money than hookers. Give her a GOOD reason for dropping out of high school such as her mother dying of cancer. This would be even better if you dropped the high school scenes and just have the teacher meet her in a bar and recognize her after a gap of 8 years. He's gotten divorced and she's legal.
2007-03-03 14:32:36 · answer #2 · answered by loryntoo 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Instead of this smart girl dropping out of school let her change schools where she will feel so comfortable and because she and this teacher don't want to do anything unethical. Later, she can become an attorney who learns this beloved teacher has been falsely accused of being involved with one of his students. She already knows he isn't that kind of person so she contacts him and becomes his defense. After he is freed and the accuser admits she was attracted to him but he only treated her like a kid, the attorney and the teacher can pursue their true feelings which have never totally died.
Just a minor suggestion, but I hope it helps.
2007-03-03 14:28:28 · answer #3 · answered by Bethany 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I think that the idea is brilliant. I think that is just somthing that no one is expecting.
Ok, I'm just an amiture writer, and only 14. But I think that it would be interesting if you make somthing in their past create a conflict. Like, (if he is still a teacher) make a boss sort of find out, and make it so that their love is forbidden and it is to be sercret. Or make the girls family come into the picture. Or somthing. I think that right about now is where a good, juicy conflict would give it that twist.
2007-03-03 14:08:04 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
Make a sidestory for her. She could drop school not becouse teacher (he, as I undestanded should be the saver/rescuer figure), and of course, not becouse her good grades, but becouse (for example) she have really bad parents (single father/mother drunkard or drug user, beater, something like that, she wants to escape from, but she finds even greater hell. Or, parents or father/mother single parent, love her dearly, but they are poor and when they/he/she suddenly die-s, girl is left to some relative who is (again) abuser of any kind, and maybe he/she make her prostitute (he/she needs money for alchohol, drugs, gambling deaths...). Your readers/watchers will have slight deja vu (there are lots of that kind of teacher/student stories out there, even the subject is taboo) but your story have some aspects of originality, and if you do it properly, I believe it could become very popular book/movie/play, so I hope you finish it without problems, with these ideas or not.
Good luck :)
2007-03-03 14:41:19 · answer #5 · answered by M 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Teacher needs to have a romantic interest fallout with someone just a little older, thus making him miss the "good ol' days" when he was younger. I can't think of why she would drop out if she gets A's other than pregnancy, drugs or kidnapping.
2007-03-03 14:09:14 · answer #6 · answered by Your Uncle Dodge! 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
That actually is a good storyline. So, she is getting A's in his class. Well, she needs to start failing on some of her papers on purpose so that the teacher will tutor her after he notices.
2007-03-03 14:34:40 · answer #7 · answered by Remus Lupin 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I can help, if the woman did not have to be a prostitute. I just don't like the idea of viewing woman in this manner. She gets As so why can't you create a scenario in which she uses her brain, instead of her pussy? And you can make the man guilty of engaging in any type of sexuality with her.
2007-03-03 14:07:45 · answer #8 · answered by Trishcia 1 · 1⤊ 1⤋
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2016-09-30 04:12:03 · answer #9 · answered by ? 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
first off, you need writing ideas, not writting ideas....
2007-03-03 14:07:14 · answer #10 · answered by jim 4 · 0⤊ 1⤋