Who wants to have a Rap Battle with me? (A 14 y.o. Latin Black Kid)?

Question

Yo, Dis is another "Jk Oringinal"

"Don't come at Jk like you hard
You nothin' close to dat
You need to take yo lil' A$S back to the schoolyard
Where that Punk A$S bully took yo chump change

Na see, I'm a hardcore Gangsta
And you a hardcore Wangsta

I ain't neva White
My rhymes are too tight fo dat
I'm Muwee Caliente
I'm too hot fo you joe
And all dis snow in South Central Chicago

JK got to NBA he was stunin'
So all you J-Kidd haters don't be frontin'
Cuz he be Taking it to da hole like my D*** in yo moma
Please,O Please get back at me cuz I'm ready fo da drama

Dis me, Dis me, if you can
Cuz I would get to poppin' if you come at me man
Wit all these words, I think you just GOT SERVED!"

Hey . guy don't be hatin'
Mister:
'Look at me I a Trany on my Period'

Tom2day your name sounds pretty gay
I ain't got to talk Sh*t to you cuz people
already know that you ain't nothing but a straight up hoe.

Answer 1

You suck at rapping. You have no internal rhyme schemes or multi-syllables. And what's more, you're raps are all cliched, misinformed, uncreative, and predictable. You rhymed gangsta with wangsta, apparently oblivious to the fact that wangsta is a play on the word gangsta. You say that you are too tight to be white, thinking that being white means sucking at rapping. Yet I can name many, many white rappers that are better than you and your favorite rapper, assuming he is 50 Cent.
You're punchlines have no cadence or depth to them, they are straightforward and unfunny.
Don't pursue a rap career, although you are probably just what the industry is looking for. Tool.

"I'm sorry if I left you pissed off like missing the toilet." (That's a punchline, in case you didn't know)

EDIT: Person below me sucks too, seriously what ever happened to spell check? Or coherent, witty rhymes?

Answer 2

im the best wangsta alive and i run this lil stage please excuse me well i take this gangsta stage im 13 and im a gangsta are you gonna have a heart attack no im not weed clock but yes i do smoke crack you hatas wish u could gun me out with pink erasers your just some ambulance chasers incase you hatas are wondering -sok is not a joke i slapped ya momma so hard i put her into a stroke when i start bustin out rhymes you cant deny i get some points yell out my gangsta warcry im infamous hatas stop hatin before i put ya in a neckbrace you aint gont nothin on me you just jealous i'll kick your *** but im alredy famous

Answer 3

Jk Jk have ya bin lookin
Mama's gone to back alley hookin
Jk Jk wipe away them tears
daddys gettin' out in a couple hard years!

Answer 4

u say u a gangsta and cant take a punch?u wannabe cracka il eat u fo lunch!!u say u aint white but u whita den snow u say u a good rappa but im stopping yo flo!dont be a rappa!go ahead and quit yo lyrics suck and u cant even spit!i told u man dont take dat job!cause at dat very second yo career ull be robbed!dats right i spit mo fiya den u il be famouse and know one ull be hiring u!so dint make dem tears and please don cry cause i can kick yo but i aint even hav to try!

Answer 5

Yo Yo ... No No

I disdain the vulgarity and misogyny of rap. Go ahead...I know you'll have to look it up.

Answer 6

this is not even a question

Answer 7

that @little tight.

well not really!