i could've lived my life with you...i saw it perfectly in my
head....me and you....highschool sweethearts ....perfect couple........our
wedding later on....... we could've made a family together......i can see
that perfectly......you with your job ..me with mine........the kids at
school.....us raising our children ..one step at a time......i would've
liked that life......that i saw...in my head...you and me growing old
together......but now lets get back to reality.........i like you and
.......you dont like me back....
[what do you think of this one? i write when im sad.....its how i get things out]
2007-03-03 05:41:26 · 5 answers · asked by BrOwN eYe'D cHiCa 2 in Family & Relationships ➔ Marriage & Divorce
awww =[. you know i will ALWAYS love you
2007-03-03 12:16:51 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
i think thats really cool that u can write something that good and meaningfull not everyone can do that and actually make it sound good like u can.
on a scale 1 to 10 i would diffently give u a 10
2007-03-03 13:46:49 · answer #2 · answered by mandy 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Life is full of dissappointments, but never turn loose of your dreams, and don't be sad, you are a very gifted writer. Oh and the one who doesn't like you back..... Hes not the one....... Mr Mc Dreamy is still out there. : )
2007-03-03 13:49:53 · answer #3 · answered by sweetpea 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
That's very good, I like it. You are very talented, you should buy yourself a journal and keep the stuff you write.
2007-03-03 13:45:17 · answer #4 · answered by Kitikat 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Better then the last one.
2007-03-03 13:44:54 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋