Can love hurt?
Will it hurt?
Is it toxic?
Like mercury,
when you touch it,
it burns through your hands.
For love, it burns through your heart.
Or is it as a sleeping pill?
One pill,
and your in bed with some guy?
Or is it like a new born puppy,
one look, and your in love,
Again I ask, Can love hurt?
Rate, 1-10
2007-03-03 05:16:29 · 12 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Books & Authors
Yes, wrote it! All the poems I post up on here.
2007-03-03 05:25:24 · update #1
6
your writting is nothing great nor mediocre. i say youre talented but rough on the edges. now youre poem had an ok start but some how didnt make me feel the emotion later on. i couldnt feel what you meant by how love can hurt.
2007-03-03 18:45:04 · answer #1 · answered by One Winged Angel 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
10
2007-03-03 05:37:13 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
7
2007-03-03 05:21:54 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
8
2007-03-03 05:26:07 · answer #4 · answered by lil_lisa921 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
it fairly is an fairly unhappy saga, yet properly written. Love comes and is going, and enjoy each and every 2d once you're in it for it rather is fleeting by no fault of our very own. I disagree with stef1024 related to the appropriate poems rhyming; poetry flows and if the words hazard to rhyme, fantastic. in the event that they do no longer, on no account stress a rhyme because of the fact it fairly is going to kill the poem greater without postpone than the delete key. T.
2016-09-30 03:48:56 · answer #5 · answered by ? 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
10.
The moral of the story: Love DEFINITELY hurts.
God Bless~
7
2007-03-03 05:20:40 · answer #6 · answered by º§€V€Nº 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
d-
Sounds like a dog to me.
Love is not describable
2007-03-03 05:27:09 · answer #7 · answered by knowitall 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
10
nice poem :)
did u write it?
2007-03-03 05:24:47 · answer #8 · answered by ☮ 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Its pretty good! I like it!! I would give it a 8.5!
2007-03-03 05:24:19 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
8.5
nice poam
2007-03-03 08:41:22 · answer #10 · answered by Caitie 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋