can anyone help me extend this composition from 328 number of words to 500 or above?

Question

the composition is We had been planninig a trip for months.we wanted to go to EL PASO TEXAS in America.We were looking forward to the magnificent views and exciting sightseeing.To being our trips,we arrived at the Changi Airport a little late and missed the flight.We had to wait for another two hours for the plane to arrive.Soon the plane arrived,Peter and Ken later found out that they had forgotten to bring their passports along.It was a shame that we had to leave them behind.Anyway,we continued and arrived in America at two in the afternoon.We went to pick up the Caravan which John had booked online,i noticed that the front tyre was puntured.We went searching for a spare tyre and soon found one including some equipments in the Caravan.I quickly changed the tyre and we drove off.Later,we arrived at the restaurant where John looed for the reservation tickets in his pocket.Then he remembered that he had forgotten to bring the tickets along.We had no choice but to go to the nearest fast

-food restaurant to eat.Anyway,we continued our trip.Unluckily,we were caught by the heavy rain and we had ran out of gas.So,we had to push the Caravan to the nearest gas station.Then,we continued going on.Suddenly,we were having high fever and stomach pains.I quickly drove to the nearest clinic."Food Poisoning,"pronounced the doctor.He gave us some medicine and advised us to rest for the whole day.We took his advice and rested the whole day in the Caravan.Because we had no more money to stay in the hospital.We saw nothing about the city except the doctor.But at least we had seen before the clinic of the America.Next day,we decided that we had enough and took the first flight back to Singapore.I regret not having seen the whole city properly;no doubt it was a beautiful city.We are planning another trip soon and hope to be luckier next time.

it is that from singapore 's airport then to el paso airport
i was typing the other half of the composition

can anyone help me extend like adding more words or things like show no tell of the person's feeling.Example: SAD: tears rolled down of his cheecks. <=some kind of Like that ok ?

REMEMBER TO MAKE THE COMPOSITION TO AT LEAST 500 WORDS OK PLS ALSO TELL ME THE NO. OF WORDS OF THE COMPOSITION

Answer 1

Not meeting the criteria of words aside, you NEED to elaborate. I know where Changi airport is, but not everyone does. It's so sudden. One minute it's el paso texas, and the next it's changi airport!

Also, add in details like: what was everyone's reactrion when Peter and Ken forgot to bring their passports? Angry? Frustrated? Annoyed? Forgiving?

Also, changi airport is a highly busy airport. you can't miss a flight and expect to hop onto the next....unless that airlines is really unpopular. Also, tell us what airlines.

Tell us what everyone felt when the tyre was punctured. Were they irritated? Sad? Scared?

Your essay isn't even complete.

Answer 2

The grammar and structure of the whole thing was messed up, here is what I managed to fix:

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We had been planning a trip to the United States for months. We wanted to go to El Paso, Texas. We were looking forward to the magnificent sights and other scenery. We arrived at the Changi Airport a little late and missed the flight. After that, we had to wait two more hours for the plane to arrive. When it did arrive, Peter and Ken realized that they had forgotten to bring their passports with them. It was a shame that we had to leave them behind. We continued anyway and arrived in America at two in the afternoon. We went to pick up the Caravan which John had booked online, and I noticed that the front tire had been punctured. We went searching for a spare tire and soon found one with some extra equipment along with it. I quickly changed the tire and we drove off. Later, we arrived at the restaurant. John then looked for the reservation tickets in his pocket. Then he remembered that he had forgotten to bring the tickets along. We had no choice but to go to the nearest fast food restaurant to eat. Anyway, we continued our trip. Unluckily, we were caught by heavy rain and we had run out of gas. So, we had to push the Caravan to the nearest gas station. Then, we continued going on. Suddenly, we started getting high fevers and stomach pains. I quickly drove to the nearest medical clinic. "Food Poisoning," pronounced the doctor. He gave us some medicine and advised us to rest for the whole day. We took his advice and rested the whole day in the Caravan because we had no more money to stay in the hospital. We saw nothing in the city except for the doctor, but (at least we had seen before the clinic of the America.) The next day, we decided that we had had enough and took the first flight back to Singapore. I regret not having seen the whole city properly; no doubt it was a beautiful city. We are planning another trip soon and hope to be luckier next time.

Answer 3

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