come someone help me finish off my poem plz?

Question

the start is like this:
The door swung open. i stoot and breathed
The new schol atmosphere

the poem needs all of theise :
alliteration
onomatopoeia
rhyme
simile
and personification

i need to make a new one that looks and sounds different so thank you for the hint but i need some thing different

Answer 1

well to start with all the words have to be spelled correctly. You need to do this on your own

Answer 2

I spent a good half hour on this. Be thankful!

The door swung open.
I stood and breathed.
The new school atmosphere, still unsheathed.
The inundation of emotions transgresses these innate rules unspoken.
Overcome by great passion, I am now alone.
A world of true fantasy swirls around my head and then fades away spontaneously.
Like a thousand soldiers marching into war, I hear students walking now.
Even the floors and and sinks talk as well in short yelps which punish the human ear.
Though, they walk strictly by some schedule, by which they have conformed to.
The day has ended, yet there is still more to explore.
Those days are done, they were so fun, and I still heard the “slam” of the new school door.

Answer 3

It is in the spirit of Dr. Suess (happy b'day!) that I suggest you read Cat in The Hat.... it will turn your brain on to everything you need to complete your poem.

Answer 4

this is not what i need
to be here
why did we move


yah thats all i got sorry