Outsiders No More!
What is that? Standing in that box, alone and all afraid,
Is it alive? Is it breathing? The outsider society has made.
What happens if sunshine touches it? Will it melt away?
Will it fall beneath the cracks; please-- there is where it will stay.
I want to reach out and help it but I still don’t know what to say,
“Please come join me in my solitude, this is where you can stay,
I live alone secluded; introverted.” But wait—am I an outsider too?
This question, what is its value? Should it really matter to you?
Why aren’t you part of this circle? You are the link that makes us whole,
But their words and glares are deafening, placing a wall between our souls.
I am the pick and you are the axe, chipping at it we will begin,
We’ll make ourselves a window, on the outside looking in.
2007-03-02 11:49:10 · 9 answers · asked by SarangHaeyo 2 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
Swinging ever slowly, the golden pendulum on the clock,
Time can heal all wounds; breaking down the wall block by block,
All you want is to be accepted, to finally hold some worth,
To feel that warmth within your heart, a smile that you gave birth,
I know that feeling well, with you I can empathize,
The pain of exclusion, it lies within your eyes,
Open up a new chapter in your book, open a new door,
Fore, together we our outsiders, no more!
2007-03-02 11:49:28 · update #1
i really like it....only it lacks beat...you should be able to clap to the rhythm or pat your leg...but the words and meaning are awesome..:D....i too write only I write songs not poems...but I guess they are kind of the same in ways..
2007-03-02 12:01:52 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
if i was listening to u at a poetry jam, i would give u a standing ovation, and then go ask for ur autograph! lol, plus it reminds me of a poem i wrote awhile ago.
2007-03-02 19:57:14 · answer #2 · answered by libbykins202 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It was so beautiful and truly true! How did you ever come up with it? I feel like you just described me. Which technically, you kinda did. Thanks for the inspirational poem!
2007-03-02 19:54:14 · answer #3 · answered by ♥Penguiin♥ 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like it
2007-03-02 19:52:27 · answer #4 · answered by × 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
sorry to long to read. I got better thing to do so just take it as a criticism.
2007-03-02 19:52:44 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
i liked it
2007-03-02 19:52:26 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's good. I like it.
2007-03-02 19:54:34 · answer #7 · answered by someday 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Nice job..)
2007-03-02 19:58:14 · answer #8 · answered by angelheart 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
your the best peom wrighter in the world I LOVED it '!'
2007-03-02 20:55:20 · answer #9 · answered by pinkalishes 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋