-Steady thoughts-
I remember all those nights we all just sat around & got so plastered we hardly could stand.
All the nights my hands hit the sand.
Late at night when we all just didn’t give a damn.
Us taking a spin…
50 on a 35, the breeze blowing my hair against my face,
Oh my what a grace,
What’s it going to take?
To once more, take that gentle drive toward the lake
Why do I constantly ask when I already now, I was just a fake…
Nothing more
The nights galore
The group, the drinks
Were all but a mere illusion
My only solution…
To conceal my self, from who I hated to be
Which was the real me
Things that I wish were truly there…
Were all so bare
But were only in my mind
This time…
Now days,
These eyes of mine always shine
These eyes of mine…
These eyes of mine are fine…
2007-03-02 10:51:47 · 7 answers · asked by Anonymous in Family & Relationships ➔ Other - Family & Relationships
HONESTLY????? It seems to me this person is hiding from herself in a shell of someone who tries to appeal to what others think she should be, and that she discovers that everything she has done has been a big lie and that in the end she finds that being herself is fine. I think its a wonderful poem of self discovery
2007-03-02 11:00:47 · answer #1 · answered by artchic1984 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I read the first line and stopped...it was obviously written about someone with their head not screwed on tight, so I'm not interested in the rest of it. Reality check.
2007-03-02 10:55:56 · answer #2 · answered by intrigue899 3 · 0⤊ 1⤋
I like the poem, but from your pic you look like you should stop reading love poems like this, no drinking,and study for some school test or something.
2007-03-07 00:17:26 · answer #3 · answered by laceywat1 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Sounds like a song to me.
2007-03-02 10:55:51 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
it makes my head hurt
2007-03-02 14:17:13 · answer #5 · answered by besthusbandever 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
it doesnt make sense and it kinda sux
2007-03-02 11:46:03 · answer #6 · answered by mayviel 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
umm...hmmm...well..uh...huh???? confusing!! It makes me want to kill someone with a hammer
2007-03-02 10:56:00 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋