does this sentence make sense?
Nikola Tesla made all of this happen and it dramatically changed our world despite getting really little credit.
especially the part where it saids "despite getting really little credit."
or you can reword it to a better sentence! thank you!!
2007-03-02 10:09:18 · 10 answers · asked by Orange? 4 in Education & Reference ➔ Primary & Secondary Education
Making all of this happen, Nikola Tesla, dramatically changed our world. Yet, she recieved very little credit for her efforts.
2007-03-02 12:53:13 · answer #1 · answered by Dave Beaver 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Nikola Tesla dramatically changed our world despite getting little credit.
2007-03-02 18:20:06 · answer #2 · answered by gregory_dittman 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Nikola Tesla dramatically changed our world, despite getting little credit.
2007-03-02 18:20:03 · answer #3 · answered by Frankie T. 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Nikola Tesla, despite getting little credit, made all this happen and it dramatically changed our world.
2007-03-02 18:18:51 · answer #4 · answered by mcavinee1 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Despite receiving very little credit, Nikola Tesla dramatically changed our world through her success.
2007-03-02 18:16:34 · answer #5 · answered by jillian0508 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Despite recieving little or no credit, Nikola Testa made all of this happen which dramatically changed the world today
2007-03-02 18:36:35 · answer #6 · answered by jen 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
This was all the result of the brilliance of Nikola Tesla, a woman whose inspiration and drive changed our world, while at the time, she received very little credit for it.
2007-03-02 18:18:43 · answer #7 · answered by barefoot_yank 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Despite getting very little credit, Nikola Tesla dramatically changed our world.
The "made all of this happen" sounds redundant and you really don't need it. =)
2007-03-02 18:18:05 · answer #8 · answered by TheDogStar12 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
This dramatically changed our world, thanks to Nikola Tesla, though she received little credit for it.
Hope it helps!
2007-03-02 18:16:18 · answer #9 · answered by Jenniferr. 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
"despite receiving very little credit".
Put a comma after world.
2007-03-02 18:18:02 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋