For my english class we are supposed to right a short "symbolic object poem".
Please be honest and tell me what you think about it, okay?
"The little stuffed animal
may seem like a toy.
But to its owner
Shes a token of love."
Please give me your honest opinions and also suggestions, etc.
2007-03-02 03:25:55 · 5 answers · asked by Anonymous in Education & Reference ➔ Homework Help
Are you going to teach it at school?
2007-03-02 03:48:29 · answer #1 · answered by Nana 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Good start, though you need to explain why it is a token of love.
Maybe a fond memory?
2007-03-02 03:35:43 · answer #2 · answered by mariahsdad 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It would be better to replace "love" and also replace "she" with another word. Think about what you want to contrast.
2007-03-02 04:55:48 · answer #3 · answered by Roc 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like it a lot
2007-03-02 04:13:15 · answer #4 · answered by Anne 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like it. Just be sure to change "shes" to "She's" since it is she is.
2007-03-02 03:31:25 · answer #5 · answered by BetsyLauren 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋