There are lots of women who after having a child begin to stay at home and quit her job.
please do not modify the sentence structure
2007-03-02 02:50:24 · 9 answers · asked by ? 1 in Education & Reference ➔ Homework Help
Place a comma after "who, "child," and "home."
Change "begin" to "decide."
"Women" is plural, so change "her job" to "their jobs"
There are lots of women who, after having a child, decide to stay at home, and quit their jobs.
I know that you said not to modify the sentence structure, but it would read better to say, "There are lots of women who, after having a child, decide to quit their jobs and stay at home." That is because they quit the job first, and then stay at home.
2007-03-02 03:03:13 · answer #1 · answered by teachermama 3 · 1⤊ 1⤋
There are lots of women who, after having a child, begin to stay at home and quit her job.
2007-03-02 04:00:46 · answer #2 · answered by AMS 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
There are lots of women who, after having a child, begin to stay at home and quit their job.
2007-03-02 03:39:17 · answer #3 · answered by mariahsdad 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
There are many women who, after having a child, begin to stay at home and quit their jobs.
2007-03-02 03:01:27 · answer #4 · answered by chicki_blue_eyez 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Many women, after having a child, quit their jobs and begin to stay at home.
2007-03-02 05:01:08 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
There are lots of women whom, after having a child, begin to stay at home and quit their jobs.
2007-03-02 02:58:42 · answer #6 · answered by charlie h 3 · 0⤊ 2⤋
there are a lot of women who after having a child begin to stay at home and quit their job.
2007-03-02 02:56:23 · answer #7 · answered by teenagegraffiti 2 · 0⤊ 2⤋
It should read: 'There are lots of women who, after having a child, begin to stay at home and quit THEIR JOBS.'.
You should never include a comma before a conjunction such as 'and' if you can avoid it. And there are two Ms in grammatical. And you should never begin a sentence with a conjunction such as 'and' if you can avoid it. As you can see, it doesn't form a proper clause.
2007-03-02 02:56:43 · answer #8 · answered by Hypergluco 3 · 2⤊ 0⤋
quit "their" jos..plural,referring to "lots"
2007-03-02 03:12:32 · answer #9 · answered by markyourdj 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋