jubilation
the dance and wine
theyr screams and shouts once so divine
rude and reckless they trun the wheel
of fate and future thought theyr views concealed
hesitation hinders and take its tolls
swaying and falling with no control
the aval;anche of no future
fading into aimnlessness
the foundation of whole mankind
crumble to the point of no returns
2007-03-01 19:49:34 · 5 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Music
Not really. Besides the poor grammar and typos, it dangles with no conclusion or summary.
2007-03-01 19:58:44 · answer #1 · answered by Straight Forward 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Not bad
2007-03-02 03:57:38 · answer #2 · answered by bndjunction4 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
emm...it's ok 4 me
nice job
2007-03-02 03:52:39 · answer #3 · answered by tang 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
nice
2007-03-02 03:57:18 · answer #4 · answered by juju 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Its different, I guess its ok.
2007-03-02 03:59:47 · answer #5 · answered by Demetria S 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋