sentence:
She is concerned by the role of the woman who is now beginning to change.
correction:
She is concerned by the role of woman who is now beginning to change.
should I use the or just omit the in this sentence
2007-03-01 14:29:25 · 5 answers · asked by ? 1 in Education & Reference ➔ Homework Help
help me to correct the gramatical error also on this sentence:
By providing an almost complete story about a carrier women’s life at the morning until she work gives the reader a picture
2007-03-01 14:31:41 · update #1
I don't know if your specific assignment is to find the mistake, or if it's to make the sentence better. I would go with
She is concerned about the roles women play, roles which are now beginning to change.
2007-03-01 14:35:42 · answer #1 · answered by Milana P 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
She is concerned ABOUT the role of WOMEN THAT is now beginning to change.
2007-03-01 22:36:21 · answer #2 · answered by NHBaritone 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
She is concerned about the, now changing, role of women.
2007-03-01 22:39:37 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
No, I belive that it is:
She is concerned by the role of women which is now beginning to change.
2007-03-01 22:36:09 · answer #4 · answered by I love Dennis Moore 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
take out "the"
I already gave an answer for the 2nd one. please correct the spelling, at least.
2007-03-01 22:35:09 · answer #5 · answered by Erin 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋