1. The Changing Phenomenon of Woman
2. Big and famous well known company such as
PricewaterhouseCoopers has jolt down seeing...........
3. so that then the reader won’t feel distinguished in some way.
2007-03-01 13:50:26 · 4 answers · asked by ? 1 in Education & Reference ➔ Homework Help
I am an international student and speaking english as a native language
2007-03-01 13:58:58 · update #1
1. The Changing Phenomenon of Woman: phenomenon is singular and should be plural, phenomena
2. Big and famous well known company such as
PricewaterhouseCoopers has jolt down seeing...........: Famous and well-known are synonyms, so their use here is redundant. I don't believe the phrase "jolt down" has any meaning.
3. so that then the reader won’t feel distinguished in some way.: Misused word, "distinguished." It means well-regarded, and its use here sounds like you're saying the reader will feel poorly regarded.
2007-03-01 14:01:03 · answer #1 · answered by NHBaritone 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
There is none on 1 and 2, just incomplete thoughts
On three so is supposed to be captialized
2007-03-01 13:58:50 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
You really can't find the errors? Please tell me you are a third grader. If not, I weep for humanity.
2007-03-01 13:55:14 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
none are sentences - just fragments
2007-03-01 13:55:39 · answer #4 · answered by Persiphone_Hellecat 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋