Blur, Blurred Burped
the bathing maiden
In the snow, slow, slow
gradient fading
gradual death
2007-03-01 11:07:48 · 28 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
Yes I like it.
2007-03-01 11:46:30 · answer #1 · answered by ▒Яenée▒ 7 · 2⤊ 0⤋
Weird
2007-03-01 19:12:39 · answer #2 · answered by Urchin 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
It paints an interesting picture, I'm just not sure what that picture is. I love whenever snow is in a poem, and I like, "gradient fading." Sure, I like your poem.
2007-03-01 19:11:12 · answer #3 · answered by Marshall 2 · 2⤊ 0⤋
Wow, that is probably the best poem with the word burp in it. Bravo!
2007-03-01 19:10:36 · answer #4 · answered by Steve 3 · 2⤊ 0⤋
I have to agree with "Steve". You managed to make the word "burped" seem... poetic. That takes skillz, Tyler!
2007-03-01 19:13:32 · answer #5 · answered by yumyum 6 · 2⤊ 0⤋
It makes me think you should not go out drinking, sluttin, and walking in the snow....
call a cab, you'll die of hypothermia....
2007-03-01 21:08:47 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
Oh yeah. It says it all. But then again I've just downed a liter of Scotch........
2007-03-01 19:12:09 · answer #7 · answered by zp055att 6 · 2⤊ 0⤋
It's good. I like the alliteration.
2007-03-01 19:10:46 · answer #8 · answered by Sweet n Sour 7 · 2⤊ 0⤋
No not really, but it was a great effort
2007-03-01 19:10:17 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
only if you'll name it "gradual death"
2007-03-01 19:12:53 · answer #10 · answered by ♫Pavic♫ 7 · 2⤊ 0⤋