On The Inside
No one knows the pain on the inside.
No one can see the pain people hide.
The fears, the tears, the yells and the whines,
no one knows what all people hide.
Behind the flesh, between the bone, it's
all the pain that remains unknown.
On the outside, they show no pain, they act, look, talk and dress the same.
But on the inside they hurt and cry.
They don't have the courage to tell you why, tears just come and fall out of their eyes.
I wrote this my sophomore year in high school. My parents had recently separated and were going to get a divorce. I believe that everyone in the world can relate to this poem! What do you think?
And yes I really wrote it, go to www.poetry.com
Author name: Jessica Kays
2007-03-01 09:21:20 · 7 answers · asked by ? 4 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Books & Authors
Excellent Poem...it really shows the pain inside you, and is nearly a graphical display of words. Beautiful. Keep it up Jessica.
2007-03-01 22:25:05 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like it - alot. I think you are right, everyone can relate to it. We've all been there. You seem to be a talented girl and I'm sure you can find inspiration in anything. Good Luck with that.
2007-03-01 09:30:22 · answer #2 · answered by ameliabedelia_03 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
it's good. i have a poem that's a little similar called World of Masks. keep writing!
2007-03-01 09:26:15 · answer #3 · answered by iluvdrma 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Yeah I like it. Reminds me of when I was in HS too , but I was the nerdy know-it-all that no one talked to.
2007-03-01 09:27:31 · answer #4 · answered by cartoon queen 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
That's really good, i write poems too, and don't listen to that hater that said " it sucks".
2007-03-01 09:36:32 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
very nice, you expressed my sorry lot very well. I see I'm not alone. BTW, your very pretty.
2007-03-01 09:26:48 · answer #6 · answered by Butch 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
it rocks! keep writing!
2007-03-01 09:54:36 · answer #7 · answered by Shadow Lark 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋