“I survive”
Call me a liar
Say I’m a looser
and I still don’t quit
Give up on me
Turn your back on me
Doubt me
and I still won’t quit
Curse me
Accuse me
Use me
Disown me
and I still don’t quit
Strip me of my color
Take my faith away
and I can’t quit
Rape me
Turn my race against me
Steal from me
and I refuse to quit
Take my family from me
Stab me
Rob me of my freedom
and I won’t quit
shoot me
torture me
kill me
and I’ll die knowing I’m not a quitter
2007-03-01 06:34:46 · 10 answers · asked by ynohpmys 1 in Family & Relationships ➔ Marriage & Divorce
AAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWW. That is a nice poem, its very good because you're not suppose to give up, I like that.
2007-03-01 06:42:49 · answer #1 · answered by LaeLae 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Desperado...do the ends justify the means? As for the poem itself, very well written. I think everyone reading the poem could empathize with some of your pain. The final line was the clencher. Well done.
2007-03-01 06:44:54 · answer #2 · answered by shannon d 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
If it's a personal poem I think its very powerful. It shows that you have strength and courage to overcome all adversaries
2007-03-01 07:37:33 · answer #3 · answered by sassy 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Don't quit your day job.
2007-03-01 06:43:41 · answer #4 · answered by Jeffrey S 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
i think you gotta know when to stop
very well written though well done
2007-03-01 06:40:04 · answer #5 · answered by Kenny K 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I'm glad I'm not you. That sounds awful.
2007-03-01 06:40:59 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
nice...full of faith and hope :)
2007-03-01 06:44:55 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
DAMN! Thats a lot of abuse!
2007-03-01 07:11:33 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
pretty good
2007-03-01 06:38:22 · answer #9 · answered by just wandering 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Not much.....................
2007-03-01 06:40:48 · answer #10 · answered by J.M.C 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋