I've used the phrase "will be discussed" twice in the same paragraph and it looks bad. I've tried using the "synonyms" thingy on microsoft word, but it's not helping...
Basically, I'm writing an introduction.. And I have "First, the reasons sales taxes on food is wrong will be discussed. After that, the sales taxes in each state and what is being done about food taxes will be discussed."
It just sounds bad cause I used it twice.. Please help me!
2007-02-28 14:15:39 · 10 answers · asked by abbas_n_chantel 2 in Education & Reference ➔ Homework Help
will be considered
will be analyzed
will be deliberated
:)
2007-02-28 14:22:34 · answer #1 · answered by chicki_blue_eyez 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
My first topic of discussion will be the reasons why sales tax on food is wrong. The sales tax in each state and what is being done about the food tax will also be discussed.
2007-02-28 14:25:36 · answer #2 · answered by karig_67 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋
The first evaluation will be the reasons sales tax on food are wrong, followed by what is being done about unecessary taxes on food.
Add a limiter to the end of the sentence to give a limited scope.
like in this state, in this country, in this city...
2007-02-28 14:22:29 · answer #3 · answered by Jason W-S 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
First I will be discussing why sales tax on food is wrong, followed by sales taxes in various states and what is being done about them.
2007-02-28 14:30:55 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
"Firstly, the reasons WHY sales taxes on food ARE wrong will be discussed. I will then concentrate on the particular sales taxes within each state, and what is being done to address them"
Just my suggestion lol.
2007-02-28 14:26:28 · answer #5 · answered by Darren 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Rephrase the first sentence like this:
First, I'll explain the reasons why sales taxes on food is wrong.
2007-02-28 14:20:36 · answer #6 · answered by llllarry1 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
you could write something like" we will explore reasons why sales tax on food is wrong."
2007-02-28 14:23:18 · answer #7 · answered by naplady 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Try saying "this paper will also cover" for the second one.
2007-02-28 14:19:38 · answer #8 · answered by Anne 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
will be introduced? examined? analyzed? thought about?
2007-02-28 14:25:03 · answer #9 · answered by bludevil260_ya 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
How about EXAMINED?
2007-02-28 14:23:05 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋