i wanna know if you like this fanfiction??

Question

you see naruto and hinata, just them 2 had a mishon to the hidden mist village to kill a assin that has been killing mershents selling houses. on the way there they where gonna play a game where they had to ask a qusetion and they had to answer it.hinata asks first who do you have a crush on naruto replyes i guss sakura ok sasy hinata your turn naruto thinks who do you have a crush on hinatas face turned red as a tomatoe she said uhhhhhhh............. do i halft to yes said naruto fine i have a big crush on y- tried to say hinata soonthey had shurikens thrown at them and they doged them naruto used shadow clone jutsuand hinata used buykagon when they found him they threw their kunias at him and hinata said come out weve found you!!!!so the man came out after naruto used his resagon on him it hit but not as much damagethen behind him hinata used jurkin to him and it dose massive damage to him he is half way dead when she used the 64 strike hes dead naruto aska so who she said i love you

it dose have some bad grammerbut i ran outta room

yes it is about naruto

i ran outta room so dont tell me about details

Answer 1

whoah.. not only grammar..
there's a lot of mispelling too..
where's the punctuation.. and those cotation marks..
(i mean at least put some periods, and less of uhhhhhhh......
and u flipped the words in some 'sentences'
BUT i think it was a good plot..
try to put more interesting details or story.... (mostly at the end)x]... and spaces....

i know there's a few of critics, and ur asking if we like the fanfiction...

Answer 2

Although it was sort of hard to read, i liked it because i love the naruXhina pairing!!!!!

Answer 3

yah! i like it. i wish it would be shown in naruto.
it is so romantic and exciting even though there are lot of corrections.