I know it sucks, but it's the poem they picked, outta all the ones I submitted. Please good for it and even if it sucks, please at least try to be nice about it.
http://www.poetry.com/voteforme/poemvote1.asp?PID=3995870
2007-02-28 12:58:51 · 15 answers · asked by √ẫηΣşşẫ 5 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
this would be good inside of a greeting card.
Now, let me tell you about poetry.com, first this is what is known as a vanity press, this company is a business, and they are in it to make money, everyone who gets thier writings "chosen" for publication, usually get real excited about it.
But like I said they are in it to make money...everone who submits, gets "chosen to be in one of thier anthologies, and alot of people pay quite a bit to see thier 1 poem in a book, Alot of talented, and not so talented writers get put into these books of poetry, and they always compile each complementary book to have the submitting authors poem on the first page.
They are an honest company, and will put your poem in a book for a fee, but they charge everone who is put in the anthology the same amount. bottom line....poetry.com makes tons and tons of money from each anthology, and the writers get screwed.
no publisher in the country views these types of books as published works, and most publishers laugh when they are told that a writers previous published works are from one of these vanity press companies.
Real publishing companies will not charge you to start the publication process.
BEWARE: There are many of these vanity press companies on the net waiting to prey on unsuspecting, and inexperianced writers.
2007-02-28 13:14:16 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
5
2007-02-28 13:03:14 · answer #2 · answered by chuba 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
This poem is extremely good for a beginner, there is defiantly some marvelous imagery in it, even nevertheless it styles of lacks direction, its slightly complicated, it starts off with you happy you have got here upon somebody, yet they are no longer rather yours? and then they bypass away, it rather is a marvelous storyline, yet you may desire to illustrate a factor interior the poem while they bypass away. It does not somewhat rhyme in places, which i do no longer blame you for, rhyming poems are very very confusing, so perhaps you may desire to easily attempt non rhyming poems to start with. in case you like the assumption of rhyming nevertheless, attempt basically making it lyrical while spoken, counting the syllables according to line is a good thank you to try this. Poetry could properly be relaxing and intensely friendly, i think of you may desire to proceed, you may additionally make some money! yet you may desire to purchase a e book on writing poetry to rather get the appropriate effects, i decide for to advise "the ode much less travelled: unlocking the poet interior of" by skill of Stephen Fry, he's spectacular and and intensely thrilling.
2016-09-30 01:05:40 · answer #3 · answered by ? 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
8/10
2007-02-28 13:07:38 · answer #4 · answered by jack 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Hey, I liked it. Short and to the point. Check your spelling through. Don't ever put yourself down. Have confidence in your ability and soon your work will start to reflect that. Keep up the good work!
2007-02-28 13:23:14 · answer #5 · answered by The Hiker 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
ok I did I gave it a 2 because it was short, mispelled and above all totally unoriginal not to mention cheasy. Better Luck Next Time!
2007-02-28 13:04:35 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 1⤋
short, simple, cute, rhythmic, I like it! lol I give it a 8 out of 10!
2007-02-28 13:02:19 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
it okay im not saying it is terrible its pretty good about 7/10 keep trying yull gey betta!!
2007-02-28 13:06:24 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
QT no like. 3 out of 10.
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2007-02-28 13:07:35 · answer #9 · answered by Chimpanzees? Monkey. 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
its ok but it could be better...its kinda small but ya i guess its ok
2007-02-28 13:04:21 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋