In life in order to stay alive one must throw out and leave his heart .
They must leave their compassion behind, their only motivation for living is rage built from suffering, so i say to you save your compassion for the weak, for showing me any is just a waste
2007-02-28 12:39:25 · 6 answers · asked by Anonymous in Family & Relationships ➔ Other - Family & Relationships
Listen, their are far more types/forms of poetry,and I did not ask for your criticism on the poem what i mean by my question is, hows it sound to you cold?/ warming/sad what? if i want criticism on the forms of poetry ill call the deadbeat teachers that i had.
2007-02-28 12:53:01 · update #1
I don't know about others, but I thinks that it's very expressive and VERY good. It IS kinda cold, but that's just another thing that makes it unique! ;) you could be a really good poem writer if you really tryed. It paints a picture right before my eyes. It's kinda sad, kinda angry, kinda ... I dunno, but it's good.
2007-02-28 12:56:42 · answer #1 · answered by King John dragon-slayer 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Living life can definitely make one feel that compassion cannot overcome the hardness of this world. But living such a life can also teach us that through the tragedies of our hearts and souls, compassion may be our only hope for survival. I love the words of this poem and believe there is truth in its meaning, that is the meaning I take from it.
2007-02-28 20:56:32 · answer #2 · answered by trixydaysy 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
This is not poetic in any way shape or form, it is pathetic cry for help, you should not continue in poetry until you have studied it far more thoroughly...
2007-02-28 20:48:09 · answer #3 · answered by Thomas 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Cold.
2007-02-28 20:47:57 · answer #4 · answered by peacegypsy@sbcglobal.net 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
it sux, no creativity, poorly written, 2/10 you are depressed and spend most of your time on the internet. get a life
2007-02-28 20:53:29 · answer #5 · answered by defragmentedbrain 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
you are sad.... depressed.. do you need someone to talk to?
2007-02-28 20:49:28 · answer #6 · answered by Shonda 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋