The Winery
Above all who have loved,
those able to see redemption
in a flawed, frail,
encapsulated soul;
Those who delve into the
wanderings of scholars,
the musings of poets,
and the vice of the niave....
I congratulate you.
I fill your cups
with an elixor of love.
Poured from the eyes of Agape...
And I watch you drink
I smile and become anxious
as the liquid flows
through your bosom
Leaps within your soul
and ferments.
Now you are a perfected wine.
I place you on the mantle
of my longing
and wait for you
to reciprocate.
2007-02-28 12:19:16 · 6 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Books & Authors
You shouldn't be putting it out here - send it to the New Yorker.
2007-02-28 23:51:19 · answer #1 · answered by themudderqueen 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Four Stars
2007-02-28 20:23:18 · answer #2 · answered by Angelus L 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I'd give you an 8 out of 10.
2007-02-28 20:27:01 · answer #3 · answered by bookworm11 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
ehh
7 outta 10
its not too original
2007-02-28 20:28:05 · answer #4 · answered by inkí 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I tip my fedora to you.
Well done, fellow wordsmith.
Peace --De
2007-02-28 20:28:08 · answer #5 · answered by Depoetic 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
its a bit wierd........... use words of more variety and make sure ure voice / opinion about ur topic is captured..............
2007-02-28 21:44:24 · answer #6 · answered by janegirl921 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋