we had to pick something that actually happened to us and we cant have rhyming
also its gota have 5-10 stanzas i just found out...
im only in 7th grade so its probably not the best, so please give me some suggestions.
im writing about the time on vacation we got lost on a smokey mountain. i had a cheer game so i had to write it fast.
the car twisting and spiraling up the mountain side,
with the night sky as dark as a shadow.
the trees were a blanket surrounding the thin, slick rode.
higher and higher we went up the smokey mounatin;directionless.
passing only a few lonely chalet, unable to find ours.
the time ticked by as fast as lightening with no where to go.
"tap tap tap" rain drizzling on the car.
the roads even slicker now, with nowhere to hault.
*I HAVE TO FINISH IT ON ADDITIONAL DETAILS...NOT ENOUGH ROOM!*
2007-02-28
11:47:59
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passing broken road railing, looking down at luminous lights below;
alone on the smokey mountain, directionless.
finally getting cellphone service, calling the owner of the chalet
he guided us to a driveway to wait for his arrival.
the silence was quickly interrupted,
a blaring engine was heard.
for a red pick-up was headed our way....
THATAS ALL I HAVE SO FAR.
AND PLEASEEE HOW CAN I DO THE PUNCUTUATION?!
2007-02-28
11:50:31 ·
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